tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4596247761043399755.post9052864745782616198..comments2024-03-27T23:50:49.743-07:00Comments on Bastion: The Last Hope: Chapter 21: O'Dwyer, MagsRob Ostermanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07226679027078689566noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4596247761043399755.post-31463570604839174672013-09-10T05:50:55.666-07:002013-09-10T05:50:55.666-07:00I'll take a look at that prose again. I think...I'll take a look at that prose again. I think it should be easier to clarify.<br /><br />As for if she saw it or not, I don't think she saw anything but I could be wrong. I do admit I'm a little nervous about how some of these characters are evolving. I think Katana needs to get tough/ find some agency/ be a bit stronger. I feel like the Action Team is lacking in strong women at the moment. That or Spice needs to do something definitive.<br />Rob Ostermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07226679027078689566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4596247761043399755.post-14500990984349041802013-09-09T20:41:11.261-07:002013-09-09T20:41:11.261-07:00Hmm..I wonder if she really did see something..at ...Hmm..I wonder if she really did see something..at least it broke up the fight.<br /><br />"his deep baritone echoed out of the room" - Not clear who this is refering to - at first I thought it was Katana and then she changed gender halfway through. In retrospect I figured out it must be Nitro, but it's not obvious.Fionahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08367178990462341240noreply@blogger.com